高考英语话题作文之21热点话题(Topical Issues) (5000字)
高考英语话题作文之话题21 热点话题类作文
I. 课前自主复习本话题作文相关词汇和短语
1.扩大就业 _______________ 2.温室气体 _______________
3.社会秩序 _______________ 4.贫富差距 _______________
5.社区服务 _______________ 6.垃圾分类 _______________
7.节能的 _______________ 8.提高…..的意识 _______________
9.人口老龄化 _______________ 10.养老保险 _______________
11.导致 _______________ 12.失去控制 _______________
13.遵守交通规则 _______________ 14.老年人 _______________
15.大规模 _______________ 16.一次性筷子 _______________
II．课中写作技巧点拨，以漫画类作文为例
请根据图画和所给词语的提示，叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事。然后，再根据此故事内容，发表你自己的感想（自拟），不得少于三点想法。
参考词汇：
help, stop, knock…down, the fallen oil bottle, straighten, disagree, set a good example to, build up our society
注意：不要受所给词语的限制
要求：1．词数：100词左右；2．开头已给出。
One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over._______________________
Task1 教师写作指导
第一步：选择要点。
左边一幅图
1.女孩跌倒
2.小明要帮她
3.小明的母亲阻拦他说：“不要扶，否则人家会说是你把她碰倒的。”
右边一幅图
1.有一天，小明母亲看到倒在地上的瓶子
2.小明说:“我扶了，你会说是我碰倒的。”
第二步：简译要点。
左边一幅图 （试题中已给出）
2.Xiao Ming wanted to help the girl up.
3.His mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.”
右边一幅图
1.Another day, the mother saw the fallen oil bottle on the ground.
2.Xiao Ming said to his mother,
(注意小明的话要用虚拟语气)
“If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.”
第三步：信息重组。
将信息分成几组，用完整的句子来表达。基础不是特别好的同学，还可将信息用几个汉语句子写出来，然后翻译成英语。如：
1. 女孩跌倒，小明要帮她。
______________________________________________________________________________
2. 小明的母亲阻拦他说：“不要扶，否则人家会说是你把她碰倒的。
______________________________________________________________________________
3. .有一天，小明母亲看到倒在地上的瓶子。
______________________________________________________________________________
第四步：句子提升。
翻译后可进一步考虑更高级的表达方式，提升句子。如：
1. His mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” (用间接引语升级)
_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 2. “I straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.”
(用虚拟语气升级)
_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________
第五步：增加要点，以使文章连贯。
1.小明的母亲看到倒在地上的瓶子，而小明却视而不见，心情如何：
比如表示惊讶，震惊等
2.小明的母亲看到这种情形后，可能对小明说些什么：
比如：你为什么不把倒在地上的瓶子扶起来呢？
翻译增加的要点
（Another day,） the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be，saying to him, “Can’t you see the fallen oil? Why can’t you straighten it up?”
第六步：自拟感想。
1.我对小明母亲在上述图中所述故事中的做法看法：不同意
2.我想：①父母应该为孩子树立好榜样
②父母不仅要关心孩子的身体，还要关心他们的思想
③父母应该让孩子知道帮助处在困难中的人是一件快乐的事。因为我们生活在社 会这个大家庭中。
3.译出上述感想
1. I disagree with what the mother did in the story.
2. ①I think parents should set a good example to their children .
②They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds.
③They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. Because we live in the society which is a big family for all of us.
第七步：增加结尾句，整理成文。
对译出的要点通过合理的组合，加上必要的连接词或词语以及照顾到文章的首尾呼应，再加上必要的结束语。
范文欣赏：
He wanted to help the girl up, but his mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” Another day, the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be saying to him, “Can’t you see the fallen oil? Why can’t you straighten it up?” But Xiao Ming said to his mother, “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.”
I disagree with what the mother did in the story. I think parents should set a good example to their children .They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds. They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live in the society which is a big family for all of us.
Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right?
Task2 实战演练，用前面所学技巧，写一篇相类似的图画类作文。
孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题,现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画,按要求用英文写一篇短文。
内容要求:
1.描述漫画内容;
2.分析漫画所揭示的问题;
3.提出你的看法。
注意:
1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯;
3.词数120左右;
4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇：铺路pave the way
写前热身：基础词汇翻译
1. 父母包揽一切 ________________________________________
2. 孩子过度依赖 ________________________________________
3. 成长 __________________ 4. 教育 _____________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ III． 课后作文反馈
热点词汇翻译：
1. 社会热议 ________________________________________________
2. 过度依赖 __________________ 3. 话题 _____________________
内容分析：
1. 描述漫画内容：
___________________________________________________________________
2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题:
___________________________________________________________________ 3. 提出你的看法:
____________________________________________________________________________
Possible version
From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.
Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children's development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.