高二英语作文最后一讲 (5000字)
包装句子；征服考官！ 提高英语作文水平，必须学会包装句子！ 英语经典句型和词组是句子包装的必备材料。 60分钟内学会包装，突破高考英语作文20分！ 写作指导： 确定人称，体裁，时态和要点 2 重视开头和结尾句 3 复核验收 高分秘籍 用句型等不能出错。力求表达高级 熟悉常用各类基本句型和连接词。采用有层次的语言组织材料。有3-4个长句，正确运用谚语和俗语。 过渡性词语 表列举：for example、for instance、 that is to say 表补充：besides、in addition、moreover apart from 表原因：because of、thanks to、due to、 owing to 、as a result of 表结果：therefore、thus、as a result、so 表结论：to conclude、in a word、in brief、 to sum up 表转折：however、nevertheless、yet 文章的组成 开头段 主题句 扩展句1 篇章 中间段 扩展句2 扩展句3 扩展句3 结尾段 结尾句 十句作文法 S(1) general talk of the topic ? S(2) Thesis: the writer’s attitude towards it ? PII S(3) The writer’s reasons to have this attitude ? S(4) Support I ? S(5)detail 1 ? S(6)detail 2 ? S(7)Support II ? S(8) detail 1 ? S(9)detail 2 ? PIII S(10)conclusion: restate the thesis 填空式作文 赞成的观点）______________. On the one hand, _理由理由2______________________. ? 2. Yet there are some people who would hold a different point of view.They think that___反对的理由_1__________ __________. Besides,___理由2______________. 3. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we decide whether__讨论的问题_____________. We should take into consideration all aspects of the problem, and then make the right decision. 99.6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively or Extensively? You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: ? 1． 有人认为读书要有选择 ? 2． 有人认为应当博览群书 ? 3． 我的看法 ? Reading Selectively or Extensively ? Some think that when we read we should read selectively. That is to say , we should
select some books we are interested in and ignore others . Reading selectively can help us concentrate our limited time and attention on those selected books. ? Some others think when we read we should read extensively. That is to say, no matter what kind of book it is, we should look it over. Reading extensively can help us enlarge our view and grasp the general knowledge from different fields. ? In my opinion, the two reading methods have their roles respectively in our reading. However, their own disadvantages are easy to see. If we only read selectively, the framework of our knowledge may not be complete; if we read extensively, we may not have so much time and energy and be specialized in one particular field. Therefore, the combination of the two methods is more reasonable. 对立观点题型 2 …… （2）我认为（我的理由） ? 1.Some people believe that_____________. For example, they think______________. And it will bring them ______________. ? 2.In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing, ________. For another thing______________. ? 3.From all what I have said, I agree to the thought that__________________ ? 98.6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: ? 1．有些人认为某些数字会带来好运 ? 2．我认为数字和运气无关。。。 ? Do “Lucky numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? ? Many people believe that numbers carry magic power and some numbers can bring good luck. It is well-known that most Chinese people consider “six”, “eight”, and “nine” as lucky numbers and set their joyous events on days that carry such numbers. Telephone numbers and car numbers consisting of such numbers are so popular that sometimes they can be sold at high prices. Some people have their own special “lucky number” and take it very seriously. One of my friends considers “three” as his lucky number and he even refuses to go out if he can’t find two companions. ? I don’t believe numbers have anything to do with luck. Take, for example, the number “four”. “Four” was once considered as an unlucky number because it pronounces the same as “death” in Chinese, but then, when someone finds out that it pronounces in music the same as “enrichment” in Chinese, “four” becomes a lucky number. It is psychological factor that makes people believe in “lucky numbers.” 解决方法型 ）问题现状 ? （2）怎样解决（解决方案的优缺点 ? 00．1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education? You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: ? 1．大学的费用（Tuition and fees）可以通过多种途径解决。 ? 2．哪种途径适合于我（说明理由）。 ? How I Finance My College Education ? While the cost of college education has risen sharply in the past few years, students have several ways to pay for their college tuition and fees. Mostly their parents will pay. Some students may apply for a bank loan and others will try to find a part-time job on the campus. And besides, many students will be awarded a scholarship. In these ways, students can pay, at least partly, for their college education. ? For me, I’ll let my parents pay my college education. This is because my parents have once promised to do so if only I could be admitted into a university. I fulfill my school work. Only in this way can I fulfill my dream of future and my parents will feel rewarded and be proud of me. ? 1.Nowadays, it is common to see________. Many people like__________________, because____________________. Besides, _____________________________. ? 2.However, ______, just like anything else, has its negative side as well. It has also given rise to a series of problems. For example,_________________. The worst of all, ________________, for the reason that________________.
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阐述式题型 ? （2） 分析并举例使其更充实。 ? 1. A good mastery of ----- can give you a lot of help. Firstly,______________. Secondly,_______________________. ? 2. There are many ways to acquire ----. You can ____________________. You can also____________________________ ? 3. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you hold it sooner or later. ? 97.1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Practice Make perfect. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: ? 1.怎样理解“熟能生巧”？ ? 2.例如：在英语学习中… ? 3.又如… ? Practice Make perfect ? Practice makes perfect, that is to say, as long as we keep practicing we will in the end handle a skill perfectly no matter how difficult it is. ? Take, for example, the study of English. When I began to study English, I had trouble in pronunciation, in listening, in remembering words, and in understanding the texts. By listening to the tapes again and again, reading the texts over and over, and speaking and writing in English as often as possible, I have now become very excellent in English. ? Another case in point is my learning to play basketball. At the beginning I couldn’t grasp the ball that my friends passed to me, to say nothing of snatch or rebound, but I continued to practice and now I am a member of the college basketball team. ? I learn from my experience that “Practice makes perfect.” 图表式题型 ? （2）引起变化的原因 1. The first graph shows us__________. At the same time, the other shows that_______ __________________________. 2. Some reasons can explain this trend. First, ___________________________.second,________________________. Third,______ _____________________________ . 3.If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesired result may come out unexpectedly. So what we should do is_____________________ ? 02.6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: ? 1． 下图所示为1990年、1995年、2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化； ? 2． 请说明发生这些变化的原因（可以从计算机的用途，价格或社会发展等方面加
3 ? 3.Therefore, in my opinion, __________. But at same time, ___________. The result depends on the balance between their advantages and disadvantages. ? 00.6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: ? 1．很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是。。。 ? 2．也有人持不同意见，。。。 ? 3．我的看法和打算 ? Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary ? A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET). ? Many people agree to this. They think oral communication is a very important part in English learning. If one can understand what foreigners say, but can’t open his mouth and express himself in English, he seems to be dumb. ? However, other people don’t think so. They will say that oral English is not so necessary because it is nearly impossible for many people to talk with foreigners face to face. ? As far as I’m concerned, I agree to the first viewpoint. With our society developing more and more quickly, people will have more chances to study abroad or to work with foreigners, and then, communication in English is very essential. Therefore, I’ve made up my mind to learn English well, and speak English fluently.
综合题型 ? 1. Today, we see ---- anytime anywhere. It shows us________________. For instance,______________. ? 2. But for me, this thing may not give any advantages to us. First, it makes people_______________. ? 3. In my opinion, this problem should be solved by ourselves. We can use means to avoid its harmful aspects. For example, we can____________. Besides, we also can_______________. ? 4. All in all, what I am concerned is how to change the worse into the better. ? 99.1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Don’t Hesitate to Say “No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: ? 1． 别人请求帮助时，在什么情况下我们会说“不”。 ? 2． 为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”。 3. 该说“不”时不说“不”的坏处。 – Don’t Hesitate to Say “No” – To help others is a virtue, but when we are asked to help in the following three cases we should say “No”. Firstly, we should say “No” when we are asked to do something illegal or immoral. For example, if one of your friends asks you to help him in a murder, you should refuse him. Secondly, we should say “No” when fulfilling his or her will is a violation of our principle. Thirdly, we should say “No” when what we are asked to do is beyond our ability. – Those who don’t say “No” even in the above three cases mainly have two kinds of misgivings. They are afraid that they may lose the friend who comes for help, or they want to gain respect by giving others an illusion that there is nothing they can’t do. – If you promise to help when you should say “No”, you may in the end fail to keep your promise and lose your friend’s trust. On the other hand, even if you have succeeded in fulfilling your friend’s will, you may feel depressed because you must have put in too much energy or money. You may even become a criminal if you help to do something illegal. So, when you should say “No”, don’t hesitate to do so. 巧妙转换句型，轻松应对写作 许多考生写出的句子显得过于单调、呆板。其实，要想在有限的时间里写出丰富、生动的句子并不难。只要对所学的英语句式加以转换，就一定能使写出来的句子更加准确、得体、简洁、灵活。 一，词与词之间的转换 1. 形容词转换为名词 This painting is very valuable. 2. 动词转换为名词 Our hometown has changed a lot these years.
4 以说明）； ? Student Use of Computers ? As shown in the chart above, we can clearly see a dramatic increase in the average number of hours a college student spends on the computer per week. In 1990, a student spent only 2 hours a week on the computer, while the number increased to 20hours by year 2000. ? What has caused such an increased? Firstly, computers are now widely used in our society, especially in universities. Nowadays, computers are used to write, read, calculate and even play games. Secondly, prices of computer have been going down very quickly. In early 90s,a 286 would cost over 35,000RMB. Now, you can buy a Pentium IV with only several thousand yuan. ? It is certainly a good phenomenon that more and more students are making use of computers in their study. However, there are still some problems and worries that need our attention. First, many students use computers only to play games or chat on the Internet. Around the campus, we can often see Internet bars full of students even deep at night. Long hours of sitting at the computer is no good to one’s health and also affects one’s study if he only chats and plays on the Internet. Second, students may become too dependent on computers and forget to learn some basic skills. When asked to write compositions during a test, some students complain that they find their brains blank if not facing a computer and typing his composition out. ? We should pay more attention to these and try to solve them so that computers will serve us better and better. ? 3． 你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。
二、词与从句的转换 As he was tired and hungry, the boy was unwilling to move on. 三、非谓语动词与从句之间的转换 1. 动名词和从句的转换 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail. 2. 分词和从句的转换 (1) 现在分词与从句的转换 As he was lying in the grass, he thought of his parents living in the countryside. (2) 过去分词与从句的转换 Once it is seen, it will never be forgotten. 3. 不定式与从句的转换 He spoke louder so that the audience could hear him clearly. 四、独立主格与从句的转换 （1）If weather permits, we shall go there on foot. 五、句与句之间的转换 1. 简单句与复合句的转换 The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. 2. 一般句式与强调句的转换 I graduated from the university last summer. 六、“二态”之间的转换 1. 时态的转换 The bell is ringing now. 2. 主动语态变为被动语态 People suggested that the meeting be put off. 七、其他形式的转换 1. 正常语序与倒装语序的转换 Though I'm weak I will make the effort. They will never give up the struggle for success 高考英语作文常用词语和句型 良好的开端等于成功的一半．在写作文时，通常以最简单也最常用的方式——开门见山法。也就是说, 直截了当地提出你对这个问题的看法或要求，点出文章的中心思想。 １．议论文： A. Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantages． B. Compared to/ In comparison with letters, e-mails are more convenient. C. When it comes to computers, some people think they have brought us a lot of convenience. However,... D. Opinions are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city and in the countryside. E. As is known to all, computers have played an important role/part in our daily life. F. Why do you go to university? Different people have different points of view. 2. 书信： A. I am writing to you to apply for admission to your university as a visiting scholar. B. I read an advertisement in today’s China Daily and I apply for the job... C. Thank you for your letter of May 5. D. How happy I am to receive your letter of January 9. E. How nice to hear from you again. 3. 演讲稿： A. Ladies and gentlemen, I feel very much honored to have a chance here to make a speech on the subject -- A Balance Diet and Health. B. Good morning everyone! Allow me, first of all, on behalf of all present here, to extend our warm welcome and cordial greeting to our distinguished guest. 二．并列用语：as well as, not only…but (also), including A. Not only do computers play an important part in science and technology, but also play an informative role in our daily life. B. All of us, including the teachers / the teachers included, will attend the lecture. C. E-mail, as well as telephones, is playing an important part in daily communication. 三．对比用语：on one hand ,on the other hand, on the contrary/ contrary to ..., though, for one thing ; for another, nevertheless A. I know the Internet can only be used at home or in the office, but on the other hand, it is becoming more and more popular for much information as well as clear and vivid pictures. B. Contrary to what I had originally thought, the trip turned out to be fun. 四. 递进用语：even, besides, what’s more, as for, so…that…, worse still, moreover, furthermore; but for, in addition, to make matters worse A. The house is too small for a family of four, and furthermore/ besides/what’s more/moreover /in addition/worse still , it is in a bad location. 五. 例证用语：in one’s opinion, that is to say, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, in fact, namely
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A. As a matter of fact, advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life． B. There is one more topic to discuss, namely/that is ( to say ), the question of education. 六. 时序用语：first/firstly, meanwhile, before long, ever since, while, at the same time, in the meantime, shortly after, nowadays, A. They will be here soon. Meanwhile, let’s have coffee. B. Firstly, let me deal with the most important difficulty. 七. 结尾句 1. 至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为…… As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that … 2. 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。 In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of …. Only in this way can ……in the future. 3. 但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢）…… But ……and……have heir own advantages. For example, …… while…… Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to…… 4. 就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为…… Personally, I believe that…… Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because…… 5. 随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。 With the development of society, ……So it's urgent and necessary to ……If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better. 6. 至于我 (对我来说，就我而言), 我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能…… For my part, I think it reasonable to…… Only in this way can you…… 7. 对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……； 第二，……；最后……但同样重要的是…… In my opinion, I think it necessary to……The reasons are as follows. First ……second …… Last but not least,…… 8. 在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。 It is difficult to say whether ……is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of…….however, from a personal point of view find…… 9. 综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论…… From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that…… 遇到不会写的单词怎么办 遇到不会的单词时，可以用同义词或近义词代替；选择不同的词性，变化一下句型；当出现了非要使用的单词不会拼写或拼不准时，不要放弃；尽量采用较简单的词和句子结构和句型来表达相近或与主题相关的内容。 作文中的首字母何时大写 冠词都不需要大写；字母多于三个(不含三个)的介词、连词首字母要大写；题目的第一个单词；名词、动词、形容词、副词、代词、感叹词首字母；大写所有英语中要求大写的单词。如月份、人名、地名等等。 作文字数如何把握 在题目要求范围内如果有能力写的稍微多一点，问题不大。如果追求长度，而忘了写那些话是不是真正有意义，是不是真正跟题目相关，那就没有太大价值。 发现跑题如何补救 从感觉跑题起写切合题目的内容，通过一些关联词转接过来，让阅卷者知道你真正想表达的内容。比如用一句“刚才谈了那么多，但是对这个问题真正重要的方面是……”即可补救。 字迹潦草会不会扣分 尽量一笔一画写清楚，潦草程度不至于让考官很难判断是没有问题的，但是如果让考官很难判断还是要扣分。 考作文的时间安排 写作理想时间是30分钟，最少不能少于20分钟，要有一定的时间限制。
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