高二英语书面表达写作指导
高二英语书面表达
Writing a composition is just like making a sandwich.
一． 改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首.
The boy is very hungry and he hurried home.
Hungry, the boy hurried home
The boy, hungry, hurried home.
二. Transformation of sentences in writing(写作中的句型转换)
A. 合并为简单句
1．把其中一句改为分词短语
He had finished supper.
He went out to have a walk then.
Having finished supper, he went out to have a walk.
2. 把其中一句改为介词短语
He was brought in.
His hands were tied behind his back.
------He was brought in with his hands tied behind his back.
B. 合并为复合句
1. The Chinese artists were to perform here that night.
The news cheered everyone of us.
-----The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered everyone of us.
2. In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast.
All these make people’s lives convenient, pleasant and colorful.
----In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, which makes people’s lives convenient, pleasant…
C. 把复合句改为简单句
1. 把从句改为分词短语
She was anxious to find a job after she finished her studies.
----Having finished her studies, she was anxious to find a job.
2.把从句改为介词短语
I insisted that he should go.
---I insisted on him going.
三. 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用以下结构：
1.Though he is wealthy, he works hard.
——Wealthy as he is, he works hard.
——In spite of /Despite his wealth, he works hard.
2. He didn’t get up until 7 o’clock.
——It was not until 7 o’clock that he got up.
——Not until 7 o’clock did he get up.
四.use “ complicated / advanced words”
注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。
1.I had a good idea.
——A good idea occurred to / struck / came to me.
——I came up with a good idea.
A. Second, twenty years ago, teenagers listened to music with tape recorders. Differently, today we use mp3, mp4 and even mp5 which are easy to take.
B. Another change is in communication. Instead of writing letters, teenagers nowadays prefer writing e-mails or calling to keep in touch with friends.
C. First, teenagers of twenty years ago learn from Lei Feng and Zhang Haidi, while now we consider Bill Gates and … as our role models.
D. What great changes they are!
E. Great changes have taken place in teenagers’ life during the past twenty years.
Correct Order : _____ECABD______________________
一. 改变句子的开头方式
三．避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语、with 复合结构等.
四.注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。
五.有效使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结构紧凑。
Common mistakes（常见错误）
1．汉式英语
2．句式单一 平铺直叙
3．基础词汇掌握不牢
4．书写不规范
Writing steps：
Attention
1. 格式 2. 人称 3.时态 4. 要点
5.语法 6. 字数 7. 书写
Example. 书面表达（满分30分）
你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报，
主题为：
保护环境从我做起。 请你根据下图所示写一篇英语短文。
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
节约用电：save electricity，turn off the lights
保护森林：protect our forests，use paper wisely，use both sides of paper，not use things
check
Is your handwriting clear enough to read?
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As to me, I will try to save electricity in my daily life by remembering to turn off the lights when I am the last person to leave the classroom in the evening. In order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. It is both sides of paper that should be used whenever it is possible. What’s more, never will I use things like paper cups or disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood.
In a word, with doing all these small things, we will not only improve our environment but also help make our world a better place to live in.