五年级日记70字
篇一：观察日记评语
你有观察，有思考，有实验，结构也很完整，叙述也有条理。
你的小蒜苗和你一样有这不服输】力争上游的劲头，你赋予小蒜苗动作、情绪，很好，继续努力
你的语言太吸引人了，你积累的那么多表示人物心情的词语，正邦，你的比喻句也是那样生动贴切，最后结尾实在精彩极了
你的观察记录很全面，你对乌龟的这段外形描写很精彩
你笔下的小蜗牛真有趣，居然会跳舞，和你道歉的那段也写得很生动，仿佛小蜗牛就是你的朋友，后两段有点多余，以后要注意内容的取舍。
你的记录真详细，和小乌龟之间的趣闻还有那么多，如果---陈述到习作中，习作的内容就更加充实，精彩了，从你不经意的语句中不难看出你的确“精心”而且“留心，写作就要这样，继续努力。
正因为有了之前自信地观察，认证的记录，你的观察日记写出了不同时间植物的变化，每一种变化的描写都很生动，有的鞋样子，有的鞋颜色，真棒。
1. 把自己观察三叶草的过程写得清楚而具体；
2. 书写能再工整些就更好了；
文中比喻句、拟人句、诗句引用得很好
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小作者是一位非常有耐心的人，每天回家第一件事就是观察自己的小豆芽有没有变化。在作者的细心观察下，我们了解了小豆芽的成长过程，是一篇不错的观察日记。
这里用到了观察五觉之“眼、耳”。如果再加上“小猫惨叫一声，”这里加上象声词“喵——”的话，文章效果会更好，更有现场感 这里用了观察五觉之“手”，不是一旁看，一旁听，而是写出了与小猫的直接接触，小猫的直接反映，好！）
点评：好！小作者又一次采用了“持续观察法”，把小猫捉老鼠的动点评：引用当时说的话开头，这个方法可取，能让人感受到小作者本文运用了拟人的写作手法，将豆子比作可爱的宝宝，有衣服，还有拉链。让人读来缺的生动有趣！由此可知，运用“拟人”的写作手法能把一样事物写活了）的兴奋感。 感表现出来了。）
结尾写出了自己的收获，提升了“观察日记”的价值，让我们觉得这是一件有意义的事情。）
本文用到了观察五觉之“眼”，而且，把金鱼多姿多彩的外表美表现出来了。语言优美，比喻恰当，如果少了这些比喻，语言就会显得干巴巴，文章就不会感染人。）
：“调皮”一词用的好！赋予金鱼人的灵性，使人对金鱼产生喜爱之情。情感自然流露，使文章充满人情味。）
本文用具体的事例说明了一个观点：小金鱼有时候可调皮了。本文结构清晰，你发现没有，是按照“总——分——总”方式构成段落的。)
开头简明扼要，用准确的数字，让我们感受到本次观察的严谨性。好！）：“三个观察点”可见小作者在本次实验中的聪明和用心，保证了在短时间内能观察到蚂蚁。）
：小作者运用“联想”的方式，把蚂蚁的吃相和吃的规矩表现出来。让人产生“现场感”。能让读者有身临其境的感觉，就是最佳的描写！）
本文动作词语运用得好，一连贯的动词，让人觉得画面活了
要把场景描写好其实很简单，就是让读者产生亲历感，本文中，小作者巧妙地把蚂蚁当成了一个训练有素的军队士兵来写，一下子拉近了与小蚂蚁间的距离，仿佛让读者亲眼看到那个浩浩荡荡的部队在前进）
观察细致！能选用不同的角度进行观察，好！）
点评：佳句！“弯腰”和“挺起胸”既写出了小草在浇水时的状态，又赋予了小草以人的特点。紧接着，根据这一弯一挺的状态马上联想到战士，把小草比作战士，那份坚强和不屈不挠的意志品质被挖掘出来了，真棒：日记格式不规范，缺少天气）
！最后引用了诗句，使文章富有文采。）
：一系列的动作是有现货顺序的，小作者聪明地运用了关联词与“先??苍翠欲滴”用得好！流动的绿色显示出蓬勃的生命力，可见小作者平时词语积累很丰富，真棒！）“ 然后??最后”使介绍富有条例，可取!）
几个并列的词语写出了绿豆的特点，从颜色、大小和新鲜度等三个角度去观察豆子，可见小作者的细致和用心。）
本段中“胖”和“挤”这两个字用得好，给予绿豆以让人的特点，拟人的写法，会使眼前的事物富有灵气，值得同学们借鉴！本段中用了“将计就计”一词，可见小作者试图用一种幽默的方式来表述，这种想法值得鼓励，但是这个词用在这里有些不合时宜，建议改成“体恤民情”怎样？同学们，也可以思考一下，还有什么更好的词语可以替换。）
本文体现了观察的准确性，用了具体的数字1.5厘米，可见小作者做事小作者在结尾处写出自己的感受，做到有观察有思考，使文章有了深度，可取！）严谨，观察用心！）
（点评：通过亲身的经历得出的结论给人的印象总是特别深刻，一次观察一种收获，好！）
周五作业：
数学：1、一张半卷子 2、练习册高考集训二3、上课发的大白卷写完
语文：1、三道病句题 2、《鸿门宴》书下注释抄写一遍 3、成语51--70抄写一遍默写一遍4、翻译句子5、罚写成语五 遍
物理：练习册
化学1、用A4纸整理二单元知识点（不用写例题）2、练习册 3、卷子写完
生物：练习册17--18页
英语：1、下周带必修二 2、背必修二单词前十个3、卷子阅读做完（有一篇精读）
附：1、写有关让梦想飞翔的稿件（板报用）周一收 2、 查找古今文化异同
篇二：数学日记50字
搬玉米的学问
今天妈妈在电视上观看了幸运52,里面有道题,小学生考博士博士也没有答对,妈妈叫我来做做,题目是:一只猴子搬玉米,每个白天搬12包,晚上吃7包,问;这只猴子什么时候能搬够500包玉米,答案A:99天 答案B100天 答案C:101天
我想:12-7=5(包),也就是说,每天搬5包,,那么,500÷5=100(天)
我正在心里偷笑,突然,我想:最后一天里搬了没有吃,就有500包,那么,就应该减1天,所以用100-1=99天,我在妈妈那里交了"卷",妈妈说"恭喜你,答对了,哇,我比博士还聪明.
逛 街
今天是周末，下午我和爷爷、奶奶一起去逛街、购物。
我们走进“真维斯”专卖店，奶奶挑选了三件29元的T恤，准备买下来．奶奶问我：“这一共多少钱呀？”我不假思索地说：“一共87元（29×3约等于90，90－3×1＝87元）。”
奶奶买了衣服后，我们便走出服饰店。奶奶说：“已经五点半了，我们去吃米粉吧。”走进米粉店，我们买了一碗中份米粉、两碗小份、一份蒸饺和两碗稀饭。奶奶问我：“虓虓，该给多少钱？”我说：“一共17元，因为中份4.50元、小份是3.50元、蒸饺3.50元、稀饭一份是1元（4.50＋3.5×3＋1×2＝17元）。”
吃完后，我们便回家了。
买桔子
生活中，处处有数学。例如：买菜啦！买文具啦！量布等等，都需要用到数学。
这个学期，老师教了一个新知识，是小数的乘法和除法。这个知识，可帮了我大忙啊！
昨天晚上，我妈妈一起去买桔子。桔子是1.8元一斤，妈妈买了4.5斤，本应该付钱8.1元。可是营业员粗心大意，不知道怎么算的，算成了9元钱。还好我利用了这个学期新教的知识，在
脑子里算过一下1.8/2＝9（角） 1.8x4＝7.2（元） 9角+7.2元＝8.1元，马上纠正了营业员的失误。
不仅营业员阿姨夸我聪明，这么小都会小数乘除法了，而且在回家的路上，妈妈还表扬我，给她省了0.9元，并且学过的知识能在生活中活用。
是啊！要是没学好这门数学，以后损失的不只是这0.9元，或许是几百，几千，甚至上亿呀 。
蜗牛何时能爬出井？
今天，我在一本书上看到了一道思考题：
一只蜗牛被困在了井里，井深15米，蜗牛每天向上爬1米，半夜向下落30厘米，蜗牛什么时候能爬出井？
我在草稿纸上列了算式：蜗牛每天爬100-30=70厘米，蜗牛10天爬70 ×10=700厘米，蜗牛20天爬70×20=1400厘米，第21天蜗牛还剩1500-1400=100厘米=1米。蜗牛爬出井，共需20+1=21天。
原来生活中处处都有数学啊！
9月9日 星期日 晴
什么是数学
今天我听奶奶讲了一个故事。
这是波兰著名数学家谢尔品斯基的真实故事。
有一天，他要搬家，他夫人把行李拿出来以后对他说:“我去叫出租车，你在这看好行李，共10个箱子。”过一会儿夫人回来了，他对夫人说:“刚才你说又10个箱子，可是我数了只有9个。”“不对，肯定是10个。”“说什么呢，我再数一次，0，1，2，3。。。。。。”
哦，我明白了，数学是由0，1，2，3，4，5，6，7，8，9组成的。
2007 年 9月 9日
角的认识
在我们的生活当中,到处都能接触到与数学有关的东西。
就拿角来说吧，只要你认真的观察就能发现很多与角有关的事物。比如我们经常看到的钟，当中午12时30分时，我发现钟面上有一个平角，如果再过10分钟，就会出现一个钝角，如果再过5分钟，也就是12时45分时，就会出现一个直角。当指针在走15分钟，也就是1时的时候，钟面上就会出现一个锐角。
我听了，看了以后心里乐滋滋的，我要认真学好数学，把学到的用到现时生活中去。
小数点的故事
小数点的头虽然小，但是我知道小数点的作用并不小。
比如说，3.80元，少了小数点，不就变成了380元了吗？3.80元跟380元的差别是多么大呀！这么一比较，不就看得出，小数点的作用有多么大了吗？
很多同学书写时经常会把它（小数点）漏掉，那么这个数就不是你本来想写的那个数了。所以我们让这个大错误别再犯了！
吃糖
今天,妈妈买回来一些糖,我迫不及待地先吃了它的五分之二,然后,我喝了口水,就去写作业了,把语文预习作业和数学练习册写完以后,我又吃了五分之一,然后妈妈说:“是什么糖这
么馋人?我也来吃几颗.”就这样，糖被我们吃了五分之四，妈妈问我：“还剩下多少糖呢？”我回答：“只有五分之一的糖了！” 这一天，我用数学知识来表示我们吃的糖，我在真开心篇三：英语日记40篇(带翻译)
Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whatever man is, time always goes on. It won’t stay to wait for somebody. You can’t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won’t leave them more. Today I found I hadn’t enough time. Although I have more than a-month holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do. I had a lot of homework to do and I am essential to complete the homework as soon as I have time. 今天，我发现时间是一个残忍的事情。无论男人，总是对的时间。它不会留下来等待某人。您不能使用任何交流时间。时间也是一个公平的事情。虽然你有很多钱，或者您享有很高的声誉，时间不会离开他们更多。今天，我发现我已经没有足够的时间。虽然我有超过一个月假期，但我发现我有很多事情要做。我有很多功课要做，我要，只要我有时间完成的功课。
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I have rested for 10 days. In these days, I felt very bored. I didn’t know to do what. Although I had a lot of things to do, I felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the hot weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. in fact, it didn’t matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in a low temperature. So when I went out, the high temperature disagreed to me.At last, I was ill.
我已经休息了10天。在这些日子里，我觉得很无聊。我不知道做什么。虽然我有很多事情要做，我觉得不舒服。我是因为炎热的天气而生病。我累了，困了，没有实力。我的父母担心我的健康。事实上，这并不重要。我总是在房间里有空调，并在低温下打开了它。所以，当我走了出去，高温不给me.At最后，我病了。
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It was sunny today. I was excited. I got up at a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine o’clock. After I had my breakfast, I went to the Wanjia Market . It was hot outside. When I arrived, my friends didn’t arrive. I waited for him in front of the KFC’s door. I haven’t seen them for a year. And in a year, we didn’t come into contact with others frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. After we greeted,we went to play basketball in Liwan Gymnasium. The match last for tow hours.Oh!I fill very happy today!
这是今天阳光明媚。我很兴奋。我起床时四十五分。我的任命，以满足九点钟。之后，我有我的早餐，我去了万家市场。这是热外面。当我到达，我的朋友们并没有达成。我在肯德基的门口等他。我还没有看到他们为一年。并在一年内，我们没有接触到其他人频繁接触。左大约十分钟，我的朋友们来到一个接一个。在我们迎接，我们去荔湾体育馆打篮球。这场比赛最后的拖车小时我今天补很开心！
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I live very happily today! In the morning, it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family, the air on the mountain is very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremely beautiful. Coming back home in the evening, family and I sat and watched TV together, we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family is happy and harmonious!
今天我过得非常开心！在早上，天气非常好！然后，我爬上山与家人，山上的空气非常清新，山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。回来晚上回家，我与家人坐在一起看电视，我们还吃着水果，一边聊天，全家其乐融融！
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The weather of today is very comfortable, though the weather forecast said it is cloudy, but just a little bit rain, very cool.The weather forecast said it is cloudy, and friends are about to play basketball, but unfortunately, in the rain it can not play. after afternoon the rain stopped to help my mother to buy food supermarket. Generally it was not bad mood today.
今天的天气很舒适，虽然天气预报说今天是阴天，但只是一点点的雨，很cool.The天气预报说今天是阴天，和朋友约打篮球，但不幸的是，在雨中它不能玩。下午雨停后要帮妈妈买菜的超市。通常它不是今天心情不好。 6
It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an Englishdaily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.
这是我们暑假的第二天。我感觉很好。我觉得我是自由的。我有很多时间做我喜欢的事情。我的父母都在中山。所以，我独自生活，但我并不感到孤独。但我没有做一些特别的东西。我住在家里看电视。哦！我写了英语日记组成。这是我的功课。今天，我睡了14小时。我以为我很疲惫。这是吃晚饭的时间。我必须去！我非常饿。
It was the first day of our summer holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free. Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In summer holidays, I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest
这是我们暑假的第一天。我们所有的人都非常高兴。为什么呢？因为我们有一个月的事我们都爱做的事。我们是免费的。虽然我们有一些功课。但是，我们可以在几天内完成它们。而其余的时间我们可以好好利用。我的上帝！我们已经经过艰苦的学习非常累。在暑假期间，我希望能有充分的睡眠和以充实自己吃的好食物。最后但并非最不重要，我会好好休息
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It was the first day of our winter holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free. Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.
这是我们的冬季假期的第一天。我们所有的人都非常高兴。为什么呢？因为我们有一个月的事我们都爱做的事。我们是免费的。虽然我们有一些功课。但是，我们可以在几天内完成它们。而其余的时间我们可以好好利用。我的上帝！我们已经经过艰苦的学习非常累。在冬季假期，我希望能有充分的睡眠和以充实自己吃的好食物。最后但并非最不重要，我会好好休息。
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It was the second day of our winter holiday. I felt good. I felt I’m free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Beijing. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an English daily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours. I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.
这是我们的冬季假期的第二天。我感觉很好。我觉得我自由了。我有很多时间做我喜欢的事情。我的父母都在北京。所以，我独自生活，但我并不感到孤独。但我没有做一些特别的东西。我住在家里看电视。哦！我写了一份英文报章组成。这是我的功课。今天，我睡了14个小时。我以为我很疲惫。这是吃晚饭的时间。我必须去！我非常饿。 10
It was the third day of our winter holiday. Today, there are many business in my mother’s company. So my mother told me to help my uncle who is the manager of my mother’s company. I sat in my mother’s office and help her answer the telephone. While I was free, I was writing my homework. Although I also have a lot of time to do my homework, I still do it. Because in my mother’s office, I had nothing to do. If I did nothing, I was wasting my time and my life. I can’t do the foolish thing. We should take good use of our time.
这是我们的冬季假期的第三天。今天，有许多生意，在我母亲的公司。所以，我的妈妈告诉我，帮助我的叔叔谁是我母亲的公司的经理。我坐在我母亲的办公室，帮她接电话。虽然我是免费的，我写我的功课。虽然我也有很多时间做我的功课，我仍然这样做。因为在我母亲的办公室，我一点关系都没有。如果我什么也没做，我是在浪费我的时间和我的生活。我不能做愚蠢的事。我们应该好好利用我们的时间。
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Today, I still went to my mother’s office. My mother was very busy, so was my father. They always live in Beijing. They must get up early. Because they will manage the factory. So I know they are very laborious. So I should save my money. Also I should help them. Although I can’t do something useful, but I think I should share the work with them. I am one of my family member. In the future, I will take a job and work. It’ time for me to begin to learn how to work.
今天，我仍然去了我母亲的办公室。我的母亲是非常忙，所以是我的父亲。他们永远活在北京举行。他们必须早起。因为他们将负责管理工厂。所以我知道他们很辛苦。所以，我要救我的钱。同时，我应该帮助他们。虽然我不能做一些有用的东西，但我想我应该分享与他们的工作。我是我的一个家庭成员。在未来，我会考虑就业和工作。这时候我开始学习如何工作。
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I have rested for a week. I began to feel bored. So I went out with my friends. They are my best friends in the middle school. We didn’t go to someplace special. We just saw the other. We had lunch together. While we were having lunch, we were still talking about the new school and new friends. Yes! A year later, we have grown riper. And we learned much more things and
got new life. We haven’t enough time to play, to waste and to lose the way. We only have two years. Two years to go, we will get the real life which belongs to us.
我已经休息了一个星期。我开始觉得无聊。于是我就和朋友们聚会。他们是我在中学最好的朋友。我们没去在某处特别。我们看见了其他。我们共进午餐。当我们吃午餐，我们仍然谈论新学校和新朋友。没错！一年后，我们已经长大成熟。并且我们学会了更多的东西，得到了新的生命。我们没有足够的时间来演奏，浪费和迷路。我们只有两年。二年去，我们将得到真正的生活，属于我们的。
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I have stayed in Shanghai alone for a week. It’s time for me to go to my real home—it is in Beijing. My parents are waiting for me. Although outside is no matter how beautiful, Beijing is still my home. In fact, there is many fresh things. Like red bayberries. In the afternoon, I took a bus to Beijing. I was very unlucky that my mp3 was stolen. I was very sad. I didn’t know why thieves went to steal other’s things. Why don’t they hunt for a job? I don’t why! I hope there is no thief in our motherland.
我住在上海，仅一个星期。现在是时候让我去我真正的家，这是在北京。我的父母都在等我。虽然外面是无论多么美丽，北京仍然是我的家。事实上，有许多新鲜的东西。像杨梅。当天下午，我坐公共汽车到北京。我很不幸，我的MP3被窃取。我很伤心。我不知道为什么小偷去窃取别人的东西。他们为什么不找工作？我不知道为什么！我希望在我们的祖国没有小偷。
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When I got home, it was very dark. Why? There is no electric. Every year in Beijing, there is lack of electric to supply. Because there are a lot of factories. And it is very cold in winter. So the government decided: supply electric to resident and the factories must stop working. My house is in the manufacturing district. I was unlucky. It was very cold. So my father use the electric making machine to make electric. Oh! What a unlucky winter!
当我回到家，这是非常黑暗。为什么呢？没有电。每年在北京，还有就是缺少电力供应。因为有很多工厂。这是非常寒冷的冬天。因此，政府决定：供应电对居民和工厂必须停止工作。我的房子是在生产区。我是不幸的。这是非常寒冷。所以，我的父亲用途电制造的机器使电。哦！什么是倒霉的冬天！
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When I got home, it was very dark. Why? There is no electric. Every year in Beijing, there is lack of electric to supply. Because there are a lot of factories. And it is very cold in winter. So the government decided: supply electric to resident and the factories must stop working. My house is in the manufacturing district. I was unlucky. It was very cold. So my father use the electric making machine to make electric. Oh! What a unlucky winter!
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Today, when I awaked up, I found the air-conditioner didn’t work. I used the control, but it still didn’t work. I knew the air-conditioner was in trouble. I went downstairs. My father told me two air-conditioner and two computer had been broken. Because my father used electric making machine to make electric, so the voltage was not stable. It led to the trouble. Oh! Whenever the government will let the factory use electric? If it lasts longer, I will be crazy!!
今天，当我醒来时，我发现空调不工作。我所使用的控制，但它仍然没有工作。我知道空调器是在麻烦。我走下楼去。我父亲告诉我的两个冷气机和两个计算机已被打破。因为我的父亲曾经电制造的机器使电力，所以其电压并不稳定。这导致了麻烦。哦！每当政府将让工厂使用电动？如果持续下去，我会疯了！
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I was bored. So I wanted to travel to Hong Kang. I told my father my decision. To my surprise, my father agreed. My father thought I always at home was bad. He thought I should go out to see our country clearly. How beautiful our country is! My father drove me a travel service. I filled out an application form. After that, the agency would finish every things. At last the agency told me it would take a week time to transact procedures.
我很无聊。所以我想前往香港康。我告诉父亲我的决定。出乎我的意料，我的父亲同意了。我的父亲以为我总是在家里不好。他认为我应该走出去，看到我们的国家清楚。如何美丽，我们的国家是！我的父亲开车，我的旅行服务。我填写了申请表。在此之后，该机构将完成每事情。在去年该机构告诉我，它会采取一个星期的时间办理手续。 18
The screen of my father’s mobile telephone is broken. When you open the mobile telephone, the screen is always white with light. You can’t see from the screen. And my father is a businessman. He needed a new one. So my father and I went to the electrical appliance shop. There are many new kinds of mobile telephones. At first, my father chose a Sumsung one. But all
the telephones have sold out. Finally, my father chose a Motorola one.
我父亲的手机屏幕坏了。当你打开手机，屏幕始终是白色光。你不能从屏幕上看到。而我的父亲是个商人。他需要一个新的。所以，我的父亲和我去了电器店。有许多新种移动电话。起初，我的父亲选择了三星。但是，所有的电话都抢购一空。最后，我的父亲选择摩托罗拉公司之一。
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The food in Shanghai disagree me. I think the food in Beijing is the most delicious. Seafood in Beijing is very fresh. Prawns in restaurant are all alive. And there are many food that you can’t see in other cities. It is very cheap that you eat seafood in Beijing. The less money you pay, the more enjoyable you are. Maybe my stomach is ill. Whatever food I eat, I am still thin. And I am too thin, I want to be a litter fatter. So I must eat more.
食物在上海不赞同我。我觉得食物在北京是最美味的。海鲜在北京是很新鲜。大虾在餐厅都活着。而且有很多的食物，你不能看到其他城市推广。你吃海鲜在北京是很便宜的。你付出的更少的钱，更多的愉快你。也许我的胃就是生病。我吃什么食物，我还是薄。而我太瘦了，我想成为一个垃圾箱腰包。所以我必须多吃。
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My dog will be dead. She is very old. We have kept her for ten years. Now her hairs are falling. And she always lies on the ground. She can’t see very clearly. She eats a little. She becomes thin. She was very strong before. She is still guarding my family. She is one of my family member. Now we are all uneasy because she will die. I think you may know my thinking. Even if it is a dog, you can’t forget it. So these days, we feet her the best food.
我的狗死了。她是很老了。我们已经把她十年。现在她的头发正在下降。她永远是在地面上。她不能看得很清楚。她吃一点。她变细。她很坚强。她还是守护我的家人。她是我的一个家庭成员。现在，我们都感到不安，因为她会死。我想你可能知道我的想法。即使它是一只狗，你不能忘记它。因此，这些天，我们脚，她最好的食物 21
It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too.
In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind. In a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped people.
这是一个阳光灿烂的日子今天，当我在早晨起来，我决定去看看我的grandparents.so我坐公交车，并到了那里，中午，他们很高兴看到我，我高兴极了，太。
当天下午，我的更远叫我帮他给植物浇水，我很高兴地看到花儿在风中微笑。
总之，今天是一个unforgetive day.because我看到了我的亲人和帮助的人
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My holiday was good. I stayed at home for sometime. I went to Tianyi Square and bought same games. But one day, my monther, my younger brother and I went to Tianyi digital square to buy games. And I bought a new uniform in the evening. I'd like to have a glass of apple juice my monther bought it for me. I says, " Thanks a lot. " I bought some shoes. I want a pair of sports shoes. In the shop, the wonderful song added tour pleasure. I see the black shoes. my monther says, " There are beautiful !"I was happy that day, because I went to Tianyi Square and had a lot of fum.
我的假期是很好的。我住在家里的某个时候。我去天一广场买了同样的游戏。但是有一天，我monther，我的弟弟和我去天一数码广场买的游戏。我在晚上买了新的制服。我想有苹果汁一杯我monther买给我的。我说，“非常感谢。”我买了几双鞋子。我想要一双运动鞋。在店内，美妙的歌声加入旅游的乐趣。我看到了黑鞋。我monther说，“有美丽的！”我很高兴的日子，因为我去天一广场，有很多FUM的。
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Ah ha, when I get up, it was time for lunch. But I really have a lot of work to do, I must write words and English dairy, then learned “Li yang” English, and then …… .Oh, my god, if I do it in the afternoon, I will ready to dead. So I wrote words, and now I’m writing my English dairy. Wish I could finish these works today. Bye
啊哈哈，当我起床，这是吃午饭的时间。但我真的有很多工作要做，我必须写单词和英语乳制品，然后学会了“李阳”英语，然后.......哦，我的上帝，如果我做了，下午，我会随时准备死了。所以我写的话，现在我正在写我的英语乳制品。希望我能今天完成这些作品。再见！
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Today was Sunday , It was a fine day, sunny. I got up at 7:00.And I washed my face, clean my teeth, and so on. The most important, I help my mother do the housework . When I was finish it ,I felt so tired .But it makes me so happy.Today was
interesting. OK, now,I have to go to bed. because the time is 10:00.
今天是星期天，那是一个晴朗的日子，阳光明媚。我起身7:00。我洗了把脸，清洁我的牙齿，等等。最重要的，我帮妈妈做家务。当我完成它，我感觉太累了，但是这让我很happy.Today很有意思。好了，现在，我得去睡觉了。因为时间是10:00。
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Oh, so unfortunatly, It was raining. And I feel so cold .I hate the wheather, I don't like raining.
When noon was coming ,the sun came out . And I even saw the rainbow. It's beautiful.
I draw the rainbow. It's colourful!
哦，这么不幸的是，这是下雨。而且我觉得那么冷，我恨wheather，我不喜欢下雨。
中午的时候来了，太阳出来了。我什至看到了彩虹。它的美丽。
我画的彩虹。它的丰富多彩
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Yesterday 10:00a.m.,we arrived China, Beijing. We were going to see the places of interesting. Geart Wall was a good idea. Well all agree it!At about 11:30a.m.,we had ated lunch,and we arrived Great Wall.Wow,when we saw the Great Wall , we all shout. How great it is!We having a great fun at Great Wall. We all like it very much!
昨日上午10时，记者来到中国，北京。我们将要看到的有趣的地方。 Geart墙是一个好主意。嗯都同意吧！在大约上午11点30分，我们已经ATED午饭，我们来到大Wall.Wow，当我们看到了长城，大家都喊。这是多么伟大！我们具有长城的一大乐趣。我们都非常喜欢它！
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I had a baby pig.It was a lovely one.It was as white as snow and with red patterns on its back.It was so fat that it looked like a ball.It had a big mouth and a small nose.Its tail was very short.It had four strong leds.Oh,I forgot to tell you that there was a hole on(或者是用in我也不太确定)its back.So it was not a real pig but a savings-box.
I like my little"pig" very much and often fed it with my pocket money as food.The pig was very smiling。It seemed to be saying thanks to me in return.The pig was heavier and heavier,at last,it was full of money.
One day,I was very sad to break the pig into pieces because I was going to contribute the money to the 29th BeiJing Olympic Games.
The night,I dreamed a sweet dream,the money I had saved was sent to BEIJING
我生了一个孩子pig.It是一个可爱的one.It是像雪一样白，并与它的back.It红色的图案是如此的脂肪，它看起来像一个ball.It了一大口一小nose.Its尾巴很short.It有四个强大的leds.Oh，我忘了告诉你，有，这不是一个真正的猪，但储蓄盒上（或者是用的我也不太确定），其back.So一个洞。
我喜欢我的小“猪”非常多，经常喂食它与我的口袋里的钱，挺难找到典型的猪很是面带微笑，似乎在说感谢我return.The猪是越来越重，最后，它是全钱。
有一天，我非常难过，打破猪成片，因为我要捐款给第29届北京奥运会。
晚上，我梦见一个甜美的梦，我的积蓄被送往北京
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It was Grandma"s(应该是一个撇，我打不出来)birthday。Father，mother and I went to visit her.She lives with my uncle in a villagenot too far away.Early in the morning we brought some presents and took the bus to get there
Grandma and uncle were so glad to see us.We gave the presents to Grandma and she was so happy.Then wo sat down to talk,while tncle prepare lunch. The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much. At 4 o"(还是一个撇）clock，we said goodbye and returned
这是奶奶的“S（应该是一个撇，我打不出来）的生日。父亲，母亲和我去拜访她。她的生活与我的叔叔在villagenot太远away.Early中，我们带来了一些礼物，并把早晨公共汽车到那里
奶奶和叔叔们很高兴看到我们，我们给了礼物给奶奶和她是如此happy.Then禾坐下来谈，而tncle准备午饭。这顿饭好得让我们都非常喜欢。 4点“（还是一个撇）时钟，我们说再见，返回
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I got up early this morning because my parents and I decided to go to Beidaihe. After breakfast, we set out. It took us about two hours to get there by car. There were thousands of people that day. We walked on the beach, picked up beautiful shells, swam in the sea, went boating and so on. We didn't go back home until 5:00. We bought some food and vegetables on our way home. In the evening, I did my homework, cleaned the room and surfed the internet. What a busy and happy day!