2014-2015学年高三一模写作优质范文汇编与分析 (800字)
虹口足球场校区
2014-2015学年高三英语一模汇编----写作
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
目前，在网上购物的人越来越多，有人说在网上购物比在实体店购物优势多，有人说还是在实体店购物好。请写一篇文章阐明你的观点。你的文章必须包括：
? 简要介绍两种购物方式的不同之处
? 你喜欢那种购物方式？为什么？
参考：
Shopping online vs. shopping in physical stores
As scientific technologies developed faster and faster, our common lives have changed more and more, one of which is our shopping way.
We have been shopping in physical stores, where a salesman may introduce many products to you and give you some advice about which one is the best choice, and you can try those clothes or shoes in person, even change another one if you find it not suitable to yourself.
However, a new shopping method sprang up --- shopping online. There appear quantities of various stores on the Internet. You just need to click your mouse, and then you can see different kinds of commodities in them, with colorful pictures and detailed descriptions. If you are not clear about something, you can ask the customer service staff for help, who usually very kind and glad to answer your any question. Moreover, you can compare the same kind of products in different stores at the same time, which is able to save your time and avoid embarrassment.
But every coin has two sides. Shopping online is not exceptional, so there are some disadvantages. First, you can never be sure whether the product is exactly what you see in the picture or read in the descriptions. What you receive may be much different from what is in your mind, for instance, strange color, wrong size or bad quality. Secondly, the products may be lost in the express delivery.
From my perspective, I prefer shopping online, because I am too busy to have time go shopping in physical stores and goods online are usually cheaper. But I always choose the shops which have good reputation.
【答案解析】文中包含题干的两个问题即可。
【教学建议】教授学生按照题干要求列出提纲，然后再写。
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II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
下学期，你们学校将引进一名新的外教，学习针对需要引进什么样的外教，以及如何利用好外教资源向在校师生广泛征求意见。请你以学生李敏的名义，给负责该项目的黄老师写一封电子邮件，提出你的建议，并陈述理由。邮件须包含以下内容：
? 你对引进什么样外教的建议及理由；
? 你对如何利用好外教资源的建议及理由。
Dear Mr. Huang,
I’m a student of senior three and my name is Li Min. Knowing that you are taking charge of the recruit of a foreign teacher for our school, I’m now writing to you to state some of my opinions about this matter.
With regard to the qualities of the foreign teacher, there are two aspects that we should place great importance on. First of all, being humorous and imaginative are necessary for the teacher, which enable the class to be enjoyable and lively. For another, to maintain the efficiency of teaching and learning, the foreigner’s ability to speak Chinese is important, since it is certain that sometimes students cannot express themselves in English.
So as to make full use of the foreign teacher resources, a variety of outdoor activities, such as English Evening and English Corner, can be held by the foreign language teacher, which provides the students with more opportunities to communicate with the teacher and to improve their oral English.
I will be delighted if you can take my advice into account. Thank you.
Sincerely Yours,
Li Min
请简要描述下面图片的内容，并谈谈你的看法。
（参考词汇： 雾霾haze, 雾霾天气 haze weather )
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虹口足球场校区
参考（虹足 王灵灵）：
As is shown in the picture, a man, coughing heavily, shouted” I almost choke to death and I am not capable of bearing the hazy
weather any more.” Undoubtedly, air pollution is becoming increasingly severe, which has aroused wide public concern. In fact, various measures have been taken to prevent the situation worsening. However, what efforts can we each make?
Student as I am, I will do what I can. Firstly, instead of being driven to school as usual, I will ride a bike or take a bus. Vehicle exhaust is known to be one of the main factors contributing to the haze. Secondly, plastic bags used frequently will disappear in my daily life. Due to their difficulty in degrading, many individuals have no alternative but to burn them. The smoke released also gives rise to the haze. Thirdly, I will communicate the harm of air pollution to others to the best of my ability. As a saying goes, great things may be done by mass effort.
In a word, it is the responsibility of everyone to protect the environment where we live.
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你班将召开一次主题班会，探讨高中生在成长过程中遇到的烦恼。请根据自己实际生活中遇到的学习、交友、代沟、同龄人攀比等现象进行思考，写一篇发言稿。文章需包括：
1. 你在实际生活中遇到的至少两种烦恼及其简要介绍；
2. 你应对这些烦恼所采取的举措和建议。
参考（虹足 袁春燕）：
Recently, with the phenomenon of chasing celebrities becoming more and more common in our class, we felt it a necessity to hold a class meeting to talk about this. Yesterday we had one. Everybody was
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involved in the discussion and it reached a heated point. Let’s take a good look at how students’s opinions vary from person to person.
Some students are crazy about celebrities for the following reasons. To begin with, they gain quite a lot of fun listening to music or watching movie. They regard it as a way to relax from a heavy study burden on them. Music or movies from celebrities can bring them extraordinary happiness. What’s more, some works of celebrities are educational. They really enjoy them a great deal. In addition, they are inclined to beauties, after all, they are adolescents who are fond of whatever or whoever looks nice. Nevertheless, others argue that it’s bad for the general development of the students who are in adolescence. As far as I’m concerned, I’m for the latter one. Adolescence is a time for them to build their character, fall into the good habit and prepare for their future. They should spend too much time not chasing or imitating others, but learning knowledge so that they can have a bright future. Besides, some celebrities aren’t what they appear to be, which in some way, may lead fans of celebrities to the wrong direction of life.
Taking the above into consideration, I do believe we’d better off chasing celebrities.
Directions: Write an English composition in over 120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你叫Jenny，你的网友Peter（高一学生）即将面临期末考试，近日，他就是否要请家教来帮他复习迎考发邮件像你求教。请给Peter回复一封电子邮件，邮件必须包括以下内容：
1. 结合你自身的学习经历就是否要请家教表达你的观点及理由；
2. 就复习迎考给出2条主要建议。
参考（虹足 曹小月）：
Hearing that you're wondering whether you should invite a tutor to help you prepare for the coming final examination, I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact 'No'.
A tutor costs high, usually 150 yuan or more per hour, which you may not be able to afford. Besides, having studied that detailed information of tutor classes from my classmates, I find that most of the information is similar to that of school's, which is even with little or no extended materials, so it's absolutely no use if you listen to the teachers with full attention in the school and review what is on your notebook carefully after class. What's more, a tutor may make you depend fully on him and lose your self-motivation on study, which is exactly the truth of study. Without it, you may never learn better. And that's why I say there's no need for you inviting a home tutor.
When it comes to preparing for the exam, I'd like to give you two suggestions. First, review the points which you're poor at. You will achieve twice the result with half the effort if reviewing the notes accompanied with several particular exercises. Second, check all the notes and make sure that you've captured all the details.
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Try hard and I believe you can achieve a good score in the exam.
Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
上周三下午你们班有五位同学不请假离校去看一位明星的演唱会，回来后还向同学炫耀。昨天，你们班围绕“追星族“现象进行了一次讨论，同学们就“追星”的现象、原因等展开了讨论。请就此用英文写一篇短文。
短文必须包括：
1、 讨论会情况的描述。
2、 你对“追星族”现象的看法。
参考词汇：追星 chase celebrities
追星族 fans of celebrities
参考范文（四川北-张鸿燕）
Last week our class had a discussion around the phenomenon that an increasing number of fans crazily chase theiridols .We made it our topic that why thesepeople ,especially young students chase these celebrities.
When it comes to the symptoms of worshipping a star, the main factor I’d like to mention is imitation.With a blind love for their idols, teenagers firmly believe that their choices are the best things in life. As a result, the stars’ clothes, hairstyles and hobbies are closely observed or followed, as well as their behaviors in public, though, to some extent, improper or even ridiculous sometimes.
However, as is universally known to us all, idols can be found everywhere but there is the only ego-self. While you’re imitating to be someone else, where are you in this world? No one can take the place of you unless you give it up yourself. Additionally, imitation means more than abandoning your own goals. Since you’re wandering along your life road aimlessly, it’s so predictable a failure that you can neither enjoy your idol’s rise to fame, nor gain from your messy school work. Eventually, you have to bite the bullet yourself.
As far as I’m concerned, our future should be more dependent on knowledge rather than star-worshipping. Scientists are the ones who help push forward the course of history. It’s required for us to concentrate on study and contribute as much as we can to society.
To sum up, I hold the view that we should put more attention to our own life rather than chasing behind others. Try to make the best of your life.
高考改革后的首次上海春考，允许应届生参加，这是对多元录取方式的一次新探索。作为一名
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高三应届生，你如何看待此次春考？你的作文应包括以下内容：
1. 简述你对此次春考的看法；
2. 说明你参加或不参加的理由。
（春考：Spring College Entrance Examination；应届生：fresh graduate）
参考（虹足 曹小月）：
There're only a few days left before the Shanghai Spring College Entrance Examination, which all the fresh graduates are allowed to take part in. It is a first try on the reformation of education system in China. However, when asked whether I will take part in this exam, I will say "No". And there are two reasons accounting for it. First, as a Grade 3 student in the junior high school, the burden on study is heavier than others. If taking part in the exam, I have to spend much more time on studying, including learning new knowledge and reviewing what I have learnt at the same time. But time is limited. I can't expand 24 hours a day to 48 hours a day. So what I can do in a day is limited, however hard I work to make full use of time. Besides, according to the document released by the Ministry of education, the university that I've been dreaming of for a long time isn't included in it. Or even though the college is good, the majors of it don't satisfy me. So there's no need attending this exam.
Generally speaking, the Spring College Entrance Examination is a breakthrough on the education system, but there're still a lot of things remaining to be promoted, such as a variety of schools and majors.
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.
假如你是某中学高三（1）班的学生李明，写一封信给学校图书馆负责老师，因为你校图书馆将选择招募课余学生图书馆员。信必须包括以下内容：
? 简要介绍个人特长
? 表达希望成为课余学生图书管理员的愿望
? 谈谈你作为课余学生管理员，对学校图书馆管理提出一些建议。
注意：稳重请勿提及真实学校
参考作文1：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Ming in Grade 3 Class 1. Now I am writing to apply for the job to be an after-school librarian. I am careful and responsible, which makes me able to take note of details in the library work. I am patient and good at putting messy things in order as well, so I will never get bored of tidying the books.
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Besides, I am warmhearted and kind. Therefore, I am glad to do them a favor when I find some students cannot find the book or some other librarians are not capable of handling the work.
Moreover, I have been a librarian in the City Library for a short period of time. Thus I believe this experience will help me do better if I get this job.
I will appreciate your kindness if you admit me into the after-school librarian group. I am looking forward to your prompt reply.
Best regards. Li Ming
参考作文2：
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Ming, a student in Class One, Grade Three. I’m writing to apply for being an
after-school student librarian.
First of all, I’d like to briefly introduce myself. I’m a meticulous and hard-working person. Besides, I have a good memory. Therefore, I’m able to arrange everything well. In addition, I’m good at
communicating with others, which will help me deal with students’ requests.
The main reason why I want to be a student librarian is that I am fond of reading. I expect to spend more time with books, so this is a wonderful opportunity for me.
However, when I am borrowing a book from the library or reading books there, I find that there
exist(可能不能这么用) some problems to be solved. So after I become a student librarian, I will take measures to deal with these problems, such as more seats for students, keep a good reading environment and so on.
I’m really eager to be a student librarian and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Li Ming
参考范文三（四川北-周振）
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Ming in Grade 3 Class 1. I’m writing to have my voiced heard that I have great interest in the position of an after-school librarian. I have prepared fully in hope of being accepted.
In my opinion,this job involves patience and responsibility. Having been a member of the students union for two years, I have been exposed to various trivial things, thus putting the messy books in good order as well as taking notes of the details in the library work is not a big deal for me. Moreover, I know to the largest content what the real concept of team work is. Enough emphasis on collective benefits has always helped me extend the efficiency due to my experience in after-school activities. Thus I believe this experience will help me do better if I get this job.
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If accepted, I wonder if the number of school library can be increased. We know books act as a way to broaden our horizon, thus the more books we have, the more accesses to knowledge we can have.
I will appreciate your kindness if you admit me into the after-school librarian group. I am looking forward to your prompt reply.
Best regards.
Li Ming
Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
3月一模
Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
科技与生活息息相关,为我们带来快捷便利。请结合实际，以“My Technologically-enriched Life”为题，谈一谈科技如何丰富了你的生活。
参考范文（四川北-黄?）
My Technologically-enriched Life
Decades of years ago, we didn’t have smart phones and pads. But now, we have indulged ourselves in a digital world which is full of information and fun. I will tell you how technology has changed our life in a fantastic way.
To begin with, technology has changed our concept of consumption, which is featured by e-business. We can buy everything we need in our daily life online simply with several clicks and the next day the items we buy will be delivered to our door, which greatly saves the trouble of crowding into the supermarkets and queuing to cash.
In addition, everyone is better-informed with the rapid spread of information. Just open the browser and everything we want to know and don’t want to know will automatically come into eye. We watch films online, chat online and live online. It’s hard to imagine what life will be like without technology.
In a word, our life is enriched by great technology from which we definitely benefit a lot. How important technology is to our life!
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Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你班班长打算在寒假组织一次班级活动，有三种方案：一、慈善义卖帮助家庭有困难的同学；
二、聘请英语专家介绍有效的学习方法；三、组织一次班级新年派对。作为班级的一员，请你根据你的实际情况，在三项方案中选择其一，提出对该项活动的建议并谈谈理由。
你的写作中必须包括：
■在三项方案中选择其一；
■对该方案提出建议；
■谈谈你提出建议的理由。
参考作文1：
Recently, what has become a heated topic of our class is that an important decision about the coming winter festival event must be made among three different choices. After a careful consideration, the proposal to hold a New Year Party earns my favor.
Seveal suggeations about the party are listed as follows. Firstly, a clear and aborbing theme must be settled. Only with a specific theme, such as Welcoming the New Ourselves or Changes in the New Year, can we eventually work out the suitable activities and decorations. Besides, a proper schedule and a name list are necessary. In other words, when to hold the party and who will attend it are sure to make a big difference in its evolving purpose and, more importantly, the success. Last but not least, about the expense, any amount of money we spend shall be listed, through which we can better control the whole process and make the full use of the resources we have.
From what has been mentioned above, if all these suggestions can be carried out strictly, it is no surprise that our New Year Party will leave everyone present a deep impression.
参考作文2：
Recently, what has become a heated topic of our class is that an important decision must be made among three different choices about the coming winter festival event. After a careful consideration, the proposal to hold a New Year Party earns my favor, followed by several suggestions.
Above all, the theme about this party decides the successs or failure. More specifically, an aborbing theme, such as Welcoming the New Ourselves will arouse great interests of classmates to participate in it. Moreover, suitable activities as well as the decorations of the party are also based on it.
In the second place, based on the settled theme, a proper schedule and a name list will make a big difference. Led by that, every detail can be taken into consideration to ensure a wonderful party after the final examinations and to invite some guests from other classes, through which we will have enough time to prepare and, by the way, enhance the friendship among classes.
From what has been mentioned above, if all these suggestions can be carried out strictly, there is no doubt that our New Year Party will leave everyone present a deep impression.
参考范文3（四川北-张鸿燕）
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With winter holiday coming, our class is planning to organize a class activity. As far as I am concerned, I prefer to participate in a charity sale, which I think is fun and meaningful.
As far as Iknow , some students in our class doesn’t have a very wealthy family background. Their parents are common people, some of whom have even been unemployed for some time and have to make livings by doing heavy or even dangerous job, such as cleaner or miner. Therefore, their children’s tuition must be a extremely heavy burden on them. I advocate a charity sale in the hope that we can donate the money to such needed students to help them relieve the poverty to some extent. The following are my suggestions.
To begin with, students can collect some of their old books, which are seldom read and may not be read any more. These old books might be others’ treasure. So why not sell them to make room for new books. In addition, we could search for the some tools with which you played when younger and now regard it as childish. If so ,why not give them to the younger students.Moreover, after the activity, all the money should be secretly mailed to the students who have been living a frugal life. As is widely recognized poorer people,in general, are more self-important. Giving money directly to them may , on the contrary, do harm to their sensitive pride.
In conclusion, everyone may need others’ help in thedifferent period of life and can also give away help as long as you are willing to. What I expect is that everyone can have equal education without much concern over money..
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
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Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.
教室的一角空着，现在征求学生意见，是布置成绿化角（Green Corner）还是学习角（Study Corner）。请你做出选择，或对教室的一角做其他的布置，提出你自己的创意，并说明理由。
参考（虹足 霍忠振）：
Admittedly, a Green Corner in a classroom does help indeed. Notwithstanding, to make every corner count, we ought to decorate a Study Corner, for the merits of a Study corner are much more salient that that of a Green Corner.
On the one hand, students will dedicate more time to learning by setting up a Study Corner. According to a 3-year survey conducted by Pedagogue, over 80% of the involved 200 classes which have a Study Corner see the students studying 12 hours per day while only 10 hours on a daily basis are
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available among over 90% of the involved classes which do not have one. That is to say, the Study Corner works.
On the other hand, having a Study Corner in the classroom promotes students’ friendship. My cousin’s story can be a case in point. He, a boy who was sick of studying, enjoyed sharing the books he read in the Study Corner and accordingly got much help from his classmates. In the end, he became a top student in his class. More importantly, he got friends with whom he can share weal and woe in a lifetime.
To put it in a nutshell, there being an empty corner in the classroom, Study Corner is a must.
Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
子曰：知之为知之 不知为不知 是知也。请结合你个人或周围同学的学习实例，谈谈你对这句话的理解。
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
每个人在生活中都有被错怪或冤枉的经历，请讲诉一个你的故事并谈谈你当时的感受或看法。 参考（虹足 徐好）：
Recently, I had a conversation with a friend about a tax referendum. When my friend asked me to explain my position, I expressed my thoughts in at least four main points. We then moved on to other topics of conversation.
To my surprise, a few days later, I got a message from him stating that he thought my view on the issue was disconcerting and went on refuting what he described as my view on the subject.
As I continued to read, my anger level started to rise. What he was talking about was not what I had said. He took my words out of context and formed an entire argument by focusing on one point which may seem moot in isolation.
No matter how you want to be seen, people will always mishear, misunderstand and misinterpret your words and your actions. But forgive them, for how can they understand in exactly the way you want them to? They are absolutely free to understand in the way they do.
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions.
你是李华，为解决你所在的学校公益社团(public welfare society)的资金短缺问题，请给全校学生写一封募捐信，募集5000元善款。信中必须包括：
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1. 向全校的捐款号召。
2. 你发起这一活动的理由。
3. 你准备怎样使用善款的计划。
（文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等任何真实信息）
参考范文（四川北-黄?）
Dear students,
I’m writing to you for your donation to our public welfare society——5,000 yuan in total.
Faced with great difficulties currently, we are short of financial funds which directly lead to the inactiveness of the society. Without the money, we can do nothing but imagine in our mind the help to those who are in need. Without the money, we can’t be the one to give a helpful hand to those who are in need. So I’m here appeal to all of you to get us out of the financial embarrassment.
The money we raise here will mostly go to the remote mountainous areas to fund 3 children who have no access to school due to poverty. We’ll pay all the fees for the 3 children and get them all the study necessities such as the text books and stationery. In addition, we will spare some cash to the 3 children’s family to help them cope with some financial barriers.
We have the faith that we should spare no efforts to help the disadvantaged. Only with your help can we perform our plan. Thanks in advance and we are looking forward to your help.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
描写一件你珍藏的物品。文章要具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品以及为什么珍藏到现在。
参考范文一：
In my drawer, there is a deliberate wooden toy horse. It was a gift from an old man in my neighborhood when I was still very young. The reason why I still keep it in my memory is that it reminds me of an old saying: there must be a use for one’s talent.
When I was ten years old, there was an old man living in my neighborhood. He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture. Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them.
To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s of wood. Some of them were sold to the toy store and others were given to us. The moment I see the lovely toy horse made by this old man, I would remember the happy childhood.
The old man impressed me deeply with his talent and kindness. From the little horse toy, we can see whatever kind of talent you have, you can find your own method to display your talent and bring love to others.
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When you ask me what I have treasured most up to now, I will tell you it’s a book without hesitation. Three days to see was a prize given by my Engligh teacher, Miss Liang in the middle school. At that time, I was encouraged to take part in an English composition contest and Miss Liang gave me great help. To my surprise, I got the third prize in the end.
After that, Miss Liang introduced Helen Keller to me. She said Helen is a successful person. First of all, her determination is the greatest thing in the world. Though she couldn’t see or hear anything, she still worked very hard. What’s more, she was so brave that she did many difficult things that normal people can hardly do. From Helen, I learn a lot -- her positive and optimistical personalities against all the odds.
Whenever I face the trouble in my life, I would think of Helen, who possesses special longings for the future and lead a life full of hopes and have confidence to make my own life more wonderful.
参考范文三（四川北-周振）
I have a wide range of collections of treasures, of which an umbrella tops first.
I happened to get this special gift on a cloudy day, which turned out to be pouring rain afterwards. On my way home, I was awkward at the school gate not only because of the heavy rain but also because of my refusal to take the umbrella from my mother earlier when it was cloudy. I regretted for not having taken her words that preparation in advance would reduce the loss to the least. However, to my surprise, my mother came into my sight, with that umbrella and with great care at that moment.
Life is full of small things. But they are also of great lessons we can learn from. This umbrella I have kept with me from then has always reminded me that make preparations in advance and get closer to success.
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